Skinny pigtailed brunette teen
Skinny pigtailed brunette teen has her shaved pussy drilled by a thick cock
A Girls School Hockey Tour Ch. 02
The next day after breakfast I went for a walk around the training area. Our girls were working hard practicing their ball skills under the eyes of Coach. I wandered over to where Ceri the team captain was sitting out on the grass. She is of medium height slim but strong with long blond hair (there are quite a few of those on our team. Perhaps we should call them the blond bombshells ?). Ceri has quite large breasts probably DD and smooth honey coloured skin. Like the others she was dressed in the white team practice polo shirt again yellow crest on left shoulder short grey wrap-around hockey skirt and long maroon socks with a white trim at the top. She has legs to die for.
Hi Ceri. How s it going?
Alright so far. At least it is on the pitch.
What do you mean?
Where were you at supper yesterday? You said you d be on our table.
I felt I needed some exercise. It s OK for you girls running around all day and for Coach. I don t want to end up a fat blob.
Kathryn and Kelly weren t at supper either said Ceri.
I know. I asked Coach to look in on them to see if they were OK.
There ve been some interesting rumours flying around today. Uh-oh this might be going where I don t want it to go!
Oh? Such as?
Such as you were with them at supper time.
Is that especially interesting?
It is when the rumours say that you shagged both of them last night.
Ceri! I m shocked at you!
You re not the one who should be shocked!
You seem pretty upset?
Too right I m upset. Why them and not me? I m older than them for a start.
I didn t know you felt that way Ceri. Are you saying that you wish I d shagged you last night?
I certainly am. And you haven t denied it!
Well I do deny it. I did not shag either Kathryn or Kelly! I m their teacher!
Who gives a shit about that! You must know I ve wanted you for the last two years?
I didn t know Ceri. I don t know what to say. I am honoured. Anyway how did this rumour start?
We were all talking at breakfast. We knew they hadn t been in for supper but didn t make anything of it. Someone asked where they were and I think Kelly said they fell asleep. Then someone said something about them sleeping together so someone else said they missed supper because they were having sex. It was only a joke but Kathryn went bright red and looked so guilty we knew we were on to something! Naturally someone made a joke about them being lesbos then Kathryn blurted out something about they couldn t be! Well obviously we knew they had been with a bloke. But who? Someone they picked up? Unlikely it s not like them and completely unlike Kathryn. Someone in the hotel? None of the waiters or staff are especially dishy then someone said that you weren t at supper either and we all looked at Kathryn. She went so red we thought she would burst!
What was the other girls reaction? Were they shocked?
Not really. We all think you re quite cute. Most of us have had a crush on you at some time or other. On the whole we were pretty pleased for them. Its about time Kelly got fucked. She s been holding on to her virginity for far too long. And as for Kathryn we all thought she must be really frigid. She s never shown any interest in boys or girls or talked about sex. She listens when we talk about it but doesn t join in. If we ask her she just says she doesn t do that. But it seems she does!
Well as I said I have not shagged either of them. I take it you re not a virgin then?
No but I ve only had sex with one boy and my first time wasn t very long ago. Some of the girls here have been shagging for some time now! Anyway stop changing the subject. You might not have shagged them but something happened. Tell me what.
They came to see me. We enjoyed each other s company and lost track of time. We all missed supper.
Not good enough. I want details.
Ceri if it had been you and we had made love would you want me to tell anyone else?
Fair enough. Tell you what. I won t pester you for details if you shag my brains out.
A charming offer Ceri my sweet. Let me think it over.
OK. But make sure you think with your dick not your brain. Anyway I ve got to practice. We have a big match tomorrow. Time to play hockey and with that Ceri jumped up and ran onto the field. I watched her go. She has a lovely bum and those legs!
I stayed awhile watching the girls and wondering how many of them might have a crush on me just at the moment. Maybe if they know that two of them are after me others will get interested too? I felt guilty. I m supposed to be in charge of discipline and here I am getting excited at the thought of having sex with the very girls I should be looking after! I also feel so horny at the same time. Those young smooth legs beneath the skirts look so tempting.
Yesterday I gave in to temptations I had been trying to fight for over ten years. I d always been so careful not to get compromised. Then I spend a week in the company of fifteen very fit nubile teenagers whom I already like and I lose all self-control! Maybe I can stop all this? I watch the girls again as they run around the field skirts flying gorgeous legs pumping breasts bouncing. But then who am I trying to kid? I d eagerly fuck each of them given the chance.
After supper I asked Ceri to join me in my room. Coach was out with the staff from the school we were playing tomorrow and wouldn t be back until late. I was still dressed for dinner in jacket and tie. My armchair was facing the slightly open door and looked out on the corridor. I wanted to talk to Ceri again but didn t want to get busted. I hoped that an open door would stop any more rumours! Ceri s chair was directly between mine and the door and faced me. Both had high backs so that anyone coming into the room would see the top of Ceri s head and my head and chest. Although the door was open if we talked quietly I knew that we wouldn t be overheard.
So have you really been wanting me for the last two years Ceri or did you just say that to wind me up?
We actually had a bit of a competition going in class to see if any of us girls could give you a hard on.
And?
We thought we caught you looking at Stacey s tits a few times and at mine and Lucy s. And you seemed to like Judith and Georgia quite a lot. We took our blazers off in class so that you could see our bras through the white shirts. We even wore tight shirts to give you a better view!
Well you were right. I used to enjoy walking up and down between the desks while you were all working trying to work out who had the biggest tits and whose nipples were visible through the bra and shirt
I looked at Ceri s tits now. She was wearing a light blue tight-fitting top with a plunging neck-line that just showed the top of her white bra. The top was very short revealing a lovely expanse of smooth flat tummy with a piercing above her belly-button. Her skirt was one of those long light flowing ones that in the right light might be transparent - but not at the moment. It was a very dark blue and she wore it quite low on her hips.
Of them all I liked your tits best. Especially when you wore that lacy bra under the tight white school shirt. I could see your nipples go hard every so often.
Could you? Wow. Well we think you used to play pocket billiards when you were walking up and down between the rows of desks. You know feeling your cock with the hand that was in your pocket. We used to try and guess how big your cock was but we could never work it out.
You were right there too. Sometimes I would stand just behind you and wank my cock for a few minutes just for you. Did you have any fantasies about me at the time?
That was probably when my nipples got hard. I used to love it when you would lean over my shoulder to mark my book or help me. I d lean my elbow back to try and nudge your crutch but you were always too far away. You know when I used to suck my pen? I would imagine it was your cock and I was sucking you off.
Is that what you want to do? Suck me off?
Oh fuck yes. I want to suck your cock and swallow your cum. I want you to cum on my face and in my cunt. I feel so horny I could touch myself right now.
Why don t you? No-one will see you. Your back is to the door. Reach under your skirt and touch yourself.
I d rather you got your cock out for me. I want to see you stroke it.
I suppose you want to see it hard throbbing with lust for you?
Too right! Go on Sir. Get it out for me!
OK. But it needs something to stiffen it first. Why don t you take your knickers off? That would help.
Ceri reached under her long skirt and lifted her hips and soon a pair of blue knickers appeared in her hands under the hem.
What shall I do with these? she asked.
Here I ll look after them I replied and stuffed them in my pocket.
Come on Ceri. Lift up your skirt and run your hands up and down those lovely legs of yours.
Ceri did just that her legs uncovered to mid thigh as she watched me start to undo my trousers. I released the hook at the top of the fly and started to draw the zipper down. I watched Ceri s breathing become shorter more ragged. Her eyes were glued to my fingers as the bulge in my boxers was revealed to her sight.
Oh take it out for me Sir. Show me your cock.
Ceri s knees were spread wide now and her hands were pushing her skirt up to the tops of her thighs. She licked her lips and her left hand disappeared between her legs and started rubbing. I folded back the cloth of my trousers to show more of my boxers my erection making a pronounced tent with a wet stain where my pre-cum was leaking. I slid my thumbs into the waistband of my underwear and lifted it over my throbbing member still obscuring it from her sight. Ceri lifted her skirt out of her way and put both her hands between her legs. I watched as she parted her pussy lips with the fingers of her left hand and rubbed up and down with her right. Her pussy lips were bright pink and very wet and her fingers made slopping noises as she worked them. I lifted my boxers away from my cock and pushed them beneath my balls holding my pulsing erection out for her to see.
Fuck its gorgeous! she whispered licking her lips and working her fingers faster.
So s your pussy Ceri I replied as I started to stroke my length for her and my pleasure. Ceri lifted her skirt even more out of the way giving me a view of her lips and the neat blond bush of pussy hair above it. I started to stroke faster spreading the leaking pre-cum over the swollen head of my circumcised prick and down the shaft and Ceri sped up her fingers matching my rhythm. I tore my eyes off her pussy to look in her face. She was staring hard at my cock. Our hands moved faster and faster as our excitement grew.
I m going to cum soon Ceri. I can t hold on much longer.
Oh fuck! Cum for me sir! Cum for Ceri. Let me see you shoot your cum your spunk!
I took Ceri s knickers out of my pocket to catch the cum as I felt the pressure build in my balls. The head of my cock was rock hard as I felt the familiar sensation. This was going to be a big one.
I m going to cum in your knickers Ceri. I m cumming for you!
Just at that moment the bedroom door crashed open!
I stuffed my cock (wrapped in Ceri s knickers) beneath the fold of my jacket and looked up to see Jackie standing behind Ceri s chair her hands on its back. She moved to the bed on my right and flopped down.
What you two up to then? Jackie asked.
I felt my heart start to slow down from the sudden panic Jackie had created in my chest and tried to look nonchalant.
She was on her tummy right leg dangling from the bed head supported on her left hand. She was short and slight with light blond hair that reached her shoulders and a pretty pixie sort of face. She was wearing a loose plaid shirt and tight jeans.
We were talking I said.
Sir was being rather hard I think interrupted Ceri but then I was very wet!
Why does everyone sound like they are talking about sex! asked Jackie.
Maybe they are! replied Ceri a little dangerously I thought. Shit was I already busted and without getting anywhere?
Hey Sir. Do you know what they re saying about you? asked Jackie.
Who is saying what Jackie? I replied sensing what might be coming next.
The other girls are saying that you and Kelly and Kathryn got a little bit shall we say friendly?
I ve heard. And I did not shag Kelly or Kathryn!
Maybe not but will everyone else at school believe you? Of course if we don t say anything no one will ever know. Would you like us to keep quiet Sir?
Well of course I would. But will you?
We would if it was worth our while said Jackie with sly look on her face. She was obviously scheming.
What did you have in mind? I asked somewhat curious about what she might want. It seemed that I shouldn t worry since my reputation was already shot to pieces.
How about we won t tell on you if you don t tell on us. About anything?
You mean you all do whatever you like and I just let you?
Pretty much yeah.
And the alternative?
You don t want that kind of gossip back at school. It wouldn t be good for you!
I don t have much of a choice do I? OK. But I won t let you do anything dangerous to yourselves or others. Deal?
Deal! Fuck this is cool. You can t tell me off for swearing! Fuck shit bugger cunt fanny pussy cock cum wank. I like this! Back in a minute!
Jackie disappeared out the door closing it behind her. What was she up to now I wondered? I lifted the corner of my jacket and wiped the end of my penis on Ceri s knickers. I glanced up to see her eyeing my cock. Our eyes met.
Looks nice even when limp she said as she licked her lips. I couldn t help it I felt my cock start to grow under her stare.
Wow! It s growing! I ve never seen one grow before! Let me see!
I took my hands away and watched as my penis continued to grow before her eyes. It inched along my left leg until it reached full length then lifted into the air pointing almost straight up twitching with my heart-beat.
Go on wank it for me asked Ceri a little breathlessly. I wrapped my hand round the shaft and started to stroke up and down as Ceri reached again under her skirt and rubbed between her legs. Just then the door opened again and Jackie came bounding in closing the door once more behind her. Ceri and I rearranged ourselves quickly interrupted again. My balls were getting frustrated and needed to cum and I could tell from the look on Ceri s face that she was also horny and frustrated.
I m back announced Jackie unnecessarily. She brought her hand out from behind her back producing a vodka bottle with an orange liquid inside. She waved it invitingly to Ceri and me and sat down on the bed. Jackie unscrewed the lid and took a long pull from the bottle. She passed it to me.
Want some? she asked. I lifted the bottle to my lips and tasted the contents. Orange juice mixed with a lot of Vodka! I passed it back and Jackie took another long pull before handing it to Ceri who took a small nip. Ceri was still hot and frustrated and started to wind Jackie up.
What makes you think everyone is talking about sex then? she asked.
Probably because I m not getting any replied Jackie before taking yet another long pull from the bottle.
I was surprised and asked Surely you have a boyfriend Jackie? A good looking girl like you?
No. No fucking boyfriend. In fact no fucking! Just masturbating! Jackie drank again.
Why haven t you got a boyfriend? asked Ceri.
I dunno. Maybe because my tits are too small replied Jackie finishing nearly half the bottle. Do you think my tits are too small Sir?
With that baggy shirt on I can t tell can I?
Jackie obligingly started to unbutton her shirt. Her fingers were a little unsteady and the colour rose in her cheeks and neck as she worked her way down to her waist. I looked at Ceri inquiringly and she shrugged as if to say she didn t know what was going on either. Jackie pulled the shirt-tails out from her jeans and let the shirt drop off her shoulders to the bed.
What do you think? Jackie asked cupping her black-bra clad breasts in both hands and presenting them for my inspection.
They re beautiful Jackie I replied again looking at Ceri. They re just the right size for you. Don t worry that they re not as big as Ceri s.
But are they as nice as Ceri s? asked Jackie.
Well I can t really compare. Ceri is still wearing a top while yours are covered by only a bra.
Then get your top off Ceri. I want to know if my tits are as nice as yours! Jackie responded before taking another long drink from the bottle.
Ceri had that what the fuck look in her eye and peeled the top over her head revealing two large shapely breasts only just held in by a skimpy white see-through bra. Her nipples were large and pink and clearly visible through the material. I felt my cock growing again under my jacket.
Jackie your breasts are lovely small and shapely and just the right size for you. But I have to say that Ceri s nipples look gorgeous good enough to eat!
And what s wrong with my nipples? asked an outraged Jackie.
Catching on Ceri replied they re hidden behind the armour plating of your bra Jackie. Take it off and show Sir how beautiful you tits really are!
Yeah they are! said Jackie as she reached unsteadily behind her back with both hands. I watched the straps go loose on her shoulders as she unhooked the bra then removed it and threw it on the bed. Wow! She really did have nice tits. They were pale and shapely and being small they seemed to defy gravity. Her nipples were small and very pink and sticking out about a centimetre from her areolas. I could feel the pre-cum oozing again from my hard cock.
Jackie you have a fantastic pair of tits and any guy would be lucky to get his hands on them.
Jackie smiled at my statement and stood up in front of me. She kneaded her breasts with a look of satisfaction on her face.
And Jackie has nice legs too don t you Jackie? prompted Ceri giving me a conspiratorial wink.
Do you think so Ceri? I asked with apparent innocence.
Oh yeah. Go on Jackie show him your legs!
Jackie obligingly reached her hands down to the button of her jeans flicking it undone with one movement. She held the top of her jeans in her right hand and pulled slowly on the zipper with her left. As she drew the zip down the left front of her jeans folded with it revealing a smooth belly and a low cut pair of white knickers. I looked up and saw that Jackie was anxiously watching my face. I smiled encouragingly at her and looked again at her belly. She held the top of her jeans in both hands and lowered them steadily over her hips and down her thighs to her knees then stepped out of them.
Nice Jackie! I said. Do a twirl for me?
She raised her arms above her head lifting her naked breasts and slowly spun round. I looked first at her thighs and bum as she rotated. Despite her slim figure they were shapely and well toned and the swelling of her mound between her legs looked positively inviting. Her belly was fantastically flat and smooth and her ribs were only just visible beneath her naked breasts. Her shoulders were quite narrow and her slender arms framed her elegant neck beautifully. Lowering my eyes again I feasted on her delightful bum and legs enjoying watching the muscles move beneath the velvety skin focussing on her creamy inner thighs.
Jackie has a really nice bum too! Don t you Jackie? asked Ceri again being a little obvious I thought. Jackie however seemed happy to oblige and turned her back toward me and pulled the top of her knickers beneath her bum cheeks bending over slightly to push her cheeks in my direction.
Beautiful Jackie I said Pull them a little lower so that I can see the tops of your legs as well.
Jackie slipped her knickers to the middle of her thighs and I caught a scent of her. Delicious!
Let Ceri see how gorgeous you are Jackie. She turned round with her eyes closed and presented her bum to Ceri allowing me to glimpse the thick light brown hair of an untrimmed young bush. I now had a raging hard-on and could not resist taking it out from under my jacket and stroking it. Ceri s eyes darted between Jackie s exposed bum and my erection licking her lips in anticipation. Her hands went between her legs and under her skirt as she rubbed herself in her excitement.
I stuffed my cock back under my jacket and said Jackie come over here a moment.
She tried to walk over but the knickers around her legs restricted her movement.
Take them off Jackie. You ll be able to walk better without them.
Jackie smiled at me as she slid her last piece of clothing down her legs to the floor and walked out of them.
You are fucking gorgeous Jackie I said.
Do you like what you see? she asked smiling broadly.
As I nodded Ceri added I bet Jackie could give an excellent blow-job couldn t you Jackie?
I ve never tried. I wouldn t know what to do she responded a little anxiously.
Its not difficult. All we need is a hard cock and I ll tell you what to do. Prompted Ceri looking at me. I nodded to her and she added kneel down in front of Sir Jackie.
Jackie did as she was told and I stood up in front of her letting my penis fall out from under my jacket. I held it out for her as she gazed at this meat in front of her face. It was like she had never seen one before.
Hold it in your right hand Jackie instructed Ceri. That s right. Now slowly slide the skin in your grip forwards and back along its length.
Fuck its so big! How am I supposed to get that inside me? Jackie asked a little worried.
Don t worry about that yet. Said Ceri. You see that clear fluid escaping from the slit in the end? Its pre-cum. Spread it over the head of his cock. You should taste it. Its quite nice!
Are you sure? asked Jackie as she looked over her shoulder at Ceri. Ceri reached out her left hand and scooped a finger full of pre-cum then raised it slowly to her own mouth. She stuck out her tongue and made a show of licking the fluid off her own finger.
Mmmmm Ceri moaned as she licked the finger clean. That s worth waiting for!
Jackie kept stroking my cock up and down but stuck her tongue out and licked some of the clear juice from the end of my penis. Her tongue was warm and soft and caressed my swollen end.
Mmm. Not bad she grinned at Ceri still stroking.
Time to suck Jackie. Let your tongue roll round the head of his cock and especially underneath it just behind the head then try to put the head in your mouth. And mind your teeth eh Sir? Ceri added looking at me with a satisfied smile on her face.
Ceri slid her skirt to the floor and stepped out of it then unhooked her bra and let it fall. I was seeing Ceri naked for the first time and my cock jumped in Jackie s mouth. Fuck she had a sexy body. She grinned at me as my eyes feasted on her gorgeous body taking in the large but surprisingly buoyant breasts with their delicious looking nipples that now stood two centimetres proud of the pink areolas surrounding them. I let my eyes drop to her smooth sexy belly and down to the thatch of pubic hair forming a tempting triangle beneath it.
I looked down at Jackie as she experimented with sucking my cock twirling her tongue around it and trying to get more length in her mouth while slowly pumping the shaft with her hand.
Time we evened things up a bit I think eh Sir? asked Ceri as she walked behind me and placed her hands on my shoulders. She slid the jacket off then loosened the tie and started unbuttoning the shirt. She ran her fingers over my bare chest and slid the shirt too off my shoulders. I sensed her kneel down behind me and felt her loosen my belt then slide my trousers and shorts to the floor where she removed them with my shoes and socks. We were all now naked together and my cock felt like it was about to blow.
I m going to cum any minute girls. Where do you want it?
Ceri stood up leaning against my right side. I could feel the soft caress of her bush against my hip her breasts against my right arm.
Cum all over Jackie s face! she said in a husky voice. I want to watch you shoot your cum!
Then take over Ceri and shoot where you want. I said.
Ceri placed her right hand behind Jackie s head pushing it forward and back in a bobbing motion and with her left hand removed Jackie s left hand from my cock placing it on my right hip and Jackie s other hand on my left. Ceri then started pumping my shaft with her left hand.
Oh fuck! I m cumming! I exclaimed as I felt my ball tighten.
Ceri pulled my cock out of Jackie s face and pointed it like this was target practice. I felt the first surge and shouted Fuuuuuucckk! as a spray of white cum shot out of my cock and hit Jackie on the forehead. As it started to drip down over her right eye another blast landed on her nose and another on her left cheek. The next hit her chin and then Ceri was on her knees beside Jackie and sucking the last drops from my deflating penis.
Jackie started giggling and watched the cum drip off her face onto her tits and belly. Fuck what an awesome sight. Jackie licked the cum that dripped past her mouth and screwed up her face.
Don t you like the taste Jackie? asked Ceri.
I m not sure. This is all a bit new.
I found Ceri s knickers in my discarded pocket and started to wipe up my cum from Jackie s face and neck and then her chest. I fondled her breasts with the now soggy knickers and continued wiping down her tummy to her belly. I then abandoned them and stroked Jackie s flesh with my hands. Lower they went until my fingers were twining her pubic hair. Jackie parted her knees and let the fingers of my right hand trace the outline of her pussy lips. She gasped and a tremor went through her belly. I withdrew my hand and licked my fingers before putting them again between her legs.
Gently I ran them the length of her slit and felt it open before my touch like the petals of a flower at sunrise. I gently rubbed back and forwards feeling Jackie get wetter and felt Ceri move over to sit on my right watching the show. Ceri s breasts were again pressing into my right arm and I glanced down to see her right hand moving in and out of her own pussy. I fixed my attention again on Jackie and became a little more positive rubbing up and down her pussy with my fingers and letting my thumb gently flick the hood over her clitoris.
I felt new life return to my deflated cock and as Jackie s excitement grew so did mine. Jackie started to moan and moved her hips in time with my fingers. Her eyes were closed and her own hands moved up to her small shapely breasts rubbing her nipples which grew harder and more pronounced. I slid the third finger of my right hand into the entrance of her cunt while continuing to rub her clit through its hood. Jackie s hips moved harder and she started to moan louder as she gripped my finger with her cunt.
Suddenly Jackie shuddered and bucked against my hand her face screwed up as if in agony her breath coming in short gasps that eventually became further apart. Jackie relaxed and opened her eyes looking at me. I slid the fingers of my right hand from her pussy and Jackie leaned forward and kissed me passionately on the mouth. I responded gently and wrapped my arms round her.
Good huh? I asked her smiling.
Good! she replied. I d like to do that again. Preferably really soon!
I felt Ceri wrap her fingers around my once-again hard cock and slowly stroke it up and down.
I need a fuck Sir! she said. I looked Ceri in the eye.
Ask me nicely Ceri!
Sir please fuck me now!
I kissed Ceri and lay on my back with my arms around her. She pulled away and sat up on my thighs her hands wrapped again round my erection. Jackie was all eyes as Ceri lifted herself up and placed my penis at the entrance to her cunt. With agonising slowness Ceri lowered her wet cunt onto my cock then proceeded to rock backwards and forwards in a satisfying fucking motion. Fuck she was wet and tight and felt great. She rhythmically squeezed my cock with her cunt muscles occasionally sitting right up so that only the head of my cock was still inside her. Jackie had lowered her face to my left hip to see all that was going on her eyes like saucers not wanting to miss anything. We kept going for ages my balls had been well and truly emptied but Ceri managed to cum a couple of times while I rubbed her clit with my thumb. My once empty balls were filling up again and soon I felt that sensation again.
I m ready to cum Ceri. Where do you want it?
Ceri slipped off me to my right my cock leaving her cunt with a wet plop and gripped my hard cock with her right hand getting faster and faster.
I m cumming! I shouted as a spurt of cum shot into the air followed by more seeping out of my cock and flowing over her hand and onto my belly. When it stopped Ceri let go and licked her hand clean then sat back and admired her handiwork.
Jackie surprised me by scooping up a finger-full of cum and licking it. She considered it for a moment then repeated the procedure making a show of sucking her finger clean of my cum.
Yeah I guess I like cum after all! she said and lowered her face to lick my belly clean. She then held my limp cock in her right hand and slowly licked it from the base to the head.
Mmmm. This tastes different she observed.
That s because it has my cum on it too replied Ceri.
I like it said Jackie before slipping my whole penis in her mouth and sucking it clean.
Sir I want to suck you off again said Jackie and before this Tour is over I want you to fuck me like you fucked Ceri.
Sounds good to me! I replied.
Here Ceri. Have you cum-filled knickers back. I said as I handed them to her.
Ceri took them and screwed them in a ball beneath her nose and inhaled deeply.
Thnks Sir!
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